First Rough Draft

monday sept 8, our rough drafts were due on the friday sept 5th but monday we had to have the peer responses filled out and brought to class. My group which has Anthony, Andrew, and Aaron (the all A's except me group :p ) did everything that we were supposed to do. everyone gave me their reaction to my essay and every single one of them told me that it needs less repeating. its hard to fill up a paper to 4 pages when you pretty much said everything in 2. but they all gave me good ideas and i will def. make my essay alot better.