Friday, October 24, 2008

outline for letter to the editor

Intro: giving all the places there are to park.

Thesis: parking at Ball State is not very good at all.

Body I: student parking- freshman parking at football stadium, others parking is different

II: visitors parking on weekdays and weekends, times and places, meters and placements

III: people coming home and dropping stuff of at dorms....impossible where i live...

Conclusion: Parking at Ball State needs to be fixed. More parking spots and more availability. times should change on when they should be aloud to have visitors. Parking services needs to have longer hours.

1 comment:

Olin said...

I really like the point you bring up about parking to bring stuff down from your dorm. I go home about every two weeks and when I need to bring stuff down I either I get really luck or I have to park really far down if there is even a spot there to park and then bring all my stuff down to my car. I guess I could be doing it during a high traffic time, and maybe thats my problem.